Catch the hints of the tongue I speak,
My accent narrates a true story;
I am crying the rivers of a fateful land,
You are breathing the aroma of Garden of Eden.
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this is so beautiful..ilike most the humble words that are displayed here...i really appreciate these kinds of honest words...this will go to my fav, since, this is the best poem i ever read since many months ago..for me, less poetic words can make the poem elegant....that's my opinion...(i just said, less poetic words can make the poem nicer...)
A very thoughtful write. I get the feeling that you are you, and it does not matter to the world who you may be......' What we want matters to none'....and in the same flow of thought....'Wherever I live, I would live in your heart'...and in the last stanza: ' I am nothing, but some ambigious words/ Woven in a futile poem remained untitled'. Our world needs all of us who can be ourselves. Even if we are untitled. Being someone else, or trying to be someone else, is what makes life so humanly complex. Enjoy the read. Blessings. Leonard