Wednesday, April 1, 2009

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I let my demons fallow never led
Don’t let your mind be what these demons feed
Looking back in retrospect
Seeing all the mistakes that I regret
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Vincent Dali
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Amber Vasquez 07 April 2009

Wonderful poem Vincent!

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Greenwolfe 1962 02 April 2009

This started out talking about him, then it talked about her. I don't know when or how the transition took place. Nor do I know the meaning of this one, except to say that her soul is falling. I don't know from where or why or how it came to fall, I just was told it was. I suppose someone is supposed to catch it. And what does it mean if they do. I have no answers, only questions about this piece of writing. So, I can't comment on this one either. Whatever! GW62

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