I have a burning desire
To set this life on fire
To watch and learn
As I let the world burn
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Yeah, punchy yet cathartic. Esra Sloblock
Another fine poem which grasps the universal truth that beneath the veneer of civility within every person lies a wild destructive beast.
Perhaps for this poem you could use the title: 'Wisps of Smoke'; just a thought.