Friday, February 10, 2006

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I have a burning desire
To set this life on fire
To watch and learn
As I let the world burn
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Dyna Misery
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Joe Breunig 18 October 2006

Perhaps for this poem you could use the title: 'Wisps of Smoke'; just a thought.

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Yeah, punchy yet cathartic. Esra Sloblock

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William Jackson 11 February 2006

Another fine poem which grasps the universal truth that beneath the veneer of civility within every person lies a wild destructive beast.

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Frank Bana 10 February 2006

This works so well! Short and sharp!

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