Friday, September 19, 2008

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Dry your eyes, and shed no more tears...
Your discomforts have been laid to waste..
The bitterness has deprived it's way out of your mouth..
Leaving you no more sadness to taste.
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Brittany Hafer
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Rakhi Jayashankar 27 September 2008

Let the title be the untitled well nice work very matured

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Emily Oldham 21 September 2008

I'm afraid i dont know what a good title would be either. i do know that its a fab poem, keep it up!

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Amber ... 19 September 2008

wow nice title LOL anyways I love this poem. It is really good.

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