Thursday, September 4, 2008

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Sitting on a door step
Waiting for you
Tears straining from my eyes
Falling with the rain
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Emma Alberts
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Dee Daffodil 04 September 2008

You leave the reader wondering...who? ? Who are you in this poem...a dog...cat..little girl...woman...mother...wife...? ? ? Who is it that would come running? ? (see all of the above...LOL) Poems that leave the reader wondering are very creative! Hugs, Dee

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