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There's a burried truth beneath all the lies,
That fiction it blinds me as it stirs and unties.
Forward I go, but I still hold back,
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Its a kind of enigma and you keep on believing someone will soon shower you with happiness and love.I love the rhyming scheme of this poem.Well done Nat!
Well Done, Natasha, You have the potential of becoming an excellent poet.
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7/25/2025 11:07:14 PM # 1.0.0
I agree with all of them. You DO have the potential of becoming an excellent poet (not to mention you are one, hehe) . If this were 20 pages, with big fonts, I would be frustrated at the time I waste in turning a page. Hmm..it really is true..that as you grow older, you learn more..and you become wiser. I know you've become wiser, and I believe you'll know how to deal with things next time, heh heh. (Yes, there'll be a next time) . Smile!