Friday, November 8, 2013
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When you were born
Nothing else seemed to matter
Then my heart was torn
My life couldn’t have been sadder
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8/1/2025 7:33:13 PM # 1.0.0
I think this is poem where the last line could also be the title. Oh Mike! This is a heart-breaking write. I hope it isn't real. I like the use of the word 'loose.' When I first read this, I wasn't sure where you were taking the reader, but I was uncomfortable. Well written and difficult at the same time. These are the kinds of choices not to be made, but I guess sometimes they must.
No it isn't real, thank goodness. Thank you. I do like your idea of using the last line as the title. Thanks