Monday, November 26, 2018

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The bright gaudiness of the maples
Before stripped of their bright clothes,
Float like bright islands above the mist,
Illuminating the forest of burnished gold.
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Bri Edwards 29 November 2018

i 'love' this line (and the rest are pretty good as well) ! : Their showy redness makes Autumn blush; i made someone blush once, but her name was not Autumn! bri (: truthfully, my mate says part of her name means Autumn in a language not English. i forget which part. to MyPoemList. bri (:

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 November 2018

Dreaming of their summer glory with autumn blush is an amazing perception. An interesting poem is excellently penned.10

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