Friday, May 16, 2008

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In dismay a thud sound
In the ground he is found
The backyard where he lies
This being without a sigh
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JACQUELINE MKINDI
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~ Jon London ~ 16 May 2008

Great piece...clear and straight at you...i like your approach to writing.. Keep up this fine work best wishes Jon.

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