Monday, October 24, 2005

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Rating: 4.7

we loved in an october
and i was withered from her heart
like a blood red autumn leaf.
there i slept forever among
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augustine sebastian
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Amanda Lea 02 November 2005

Simply gorgeous. Thank you.

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Simon Whild 02 November 2005

A very atmospheric poem that uses excellent metaphors and creats superb mood pictures.

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Mary Nagy 24 October 2005

There are so many nice images here Augustine! I especially like the beamed fingers of evening light.........very nice. Sincerely, Mary

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