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lovely poem i especially enjoyed the beginning. sending my love alexander

very nice poem. i love the feeling you give to it. you should think of publishing. best of wishes, lesly garza :)

wow, id say of those i read this is the best. i cant wait to read the rest!

Of your poem, this one I definitely like the best. It is nicely constructed with a lovely theme. You express your thoughts and emotions well. Well done.

Quote By: ESB This poem is deep it come from the soul 10/10 Some how you found it...what I 've been trying to find a way to say. Fantastic poem I'm glad you wrote it/my favorites e.s.b everyone has their own way of saying certain things, it's just how it's expressed everything comes out through a different medium and i'm glad you think so highly of it

Well penned, , poem is with nice flow..keep writing... Fahim