Monday, April 9, 2007

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She dropped him off on the side of the road, about mid morn
watching her drive away was like watching her drive off a cliff.
He knew it would be the last time he ever saw her.
Standing there alone on the side of the road,
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Bryan Lee Greer
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Shelley L Baxter-stanley 16 April 2007

Wow, this poem is quite the piece of work....long but well written! It had lots of feelings, sights and sounds to take in which makes a poem interesting! Good job and keep sharing from your heart Bryan. =Shelley=

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Dee Daffodil 10 April 2007

Wow...this is a very cool poem! It's like a bad dream that you can never wake up from...very nicely done Bryan! ! Hugs, Dee

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