Thursday, April 27, 2006

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Crumpled parchment
between my fingers
in piles of unsaved data.
Squished like cockroaches,
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Joyce Chelmo
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Paul the Lion 03 May 2006

Aww, but Joyce, you described it very well, or at least the best you could. You're a great lyricist.

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Brian Dorn 27 April 2006

Wow, Joyce, excellent poem! The anguish kept building and building... profound ending. Brian

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Esther Leclerc 27 April 2006

You've described that misery all too well, Joyce - this poem fairly screams. Peace to you.

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