Wednesday, March 22, 2006

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Sing me a deadly lullaby, you better make it soft and sweet.
Hypnotize me, mesmerize me,
Put this broken heart to sleep.
Let me close my eyes, and let me rest inside your arms.
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Besa Dede 23 September 2024

Very beautifully yet sadly written poem! I love the flowing of the story that goes through the verses. Thank you for sharing

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i luv this 1 2! ! ! i really like ur poems! ur so good @ writing.. always and forever JAde

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Jade chi-Kahn 10 April 2006

I really liked this one. I was so full of life. I could sense the feelings in this poem. It's a very nice piece of work!

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Mary Nagy 31 March 2006

What an emotional poem! The images you've created are wonderful Crystal....almost a creepy sort of romance. Very good. Sincerely, Mary

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Crystal Johnson

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