The exchange of words is repetitive.
Thrown back and forth in a never ending game of tag
we've been playing for years.
Balancing english and broken spanish on the tip of the tongue,
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(3) ...I can hear people saying: " What does she mean wiith that " mucho mucho two much" ? I start laughing now like crazy. Excellently presented, Maia! KEEP ON creating! At least: keep on WRITING, thank you1
(2) the humor you have put in this poem, it resembled mine at your age. This is a well balanced poem in all its category, perhaps this will also be chosen as TMPOTD.. I have never read a poem of this intelligence.
(1) I have really ENJOYED this mesmerizing poem. You create a true poem to be read, enjoyed and I understand your way with words. You have a very playful character, very smart and
Keep writing on Poem Hunter, I meant here below.