Thursday, July 25, 2013

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Rating: 4.5

Those very stares begin at dawn and winter has a hold.
I frown the gust across the lawn, not bundled for the cold.
The passive change I might subject is subtle say the least.
For saving me has churned awhile by mother and her priest.
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Thomas Adams
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A Michaelle Yarbrough 25 July 2013

I like the poem. It is well written and had nice flow. The rhythm and rhyme are very nice

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