Monday, August 27, 2012

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Tired, time to sleep
Eye lids grow heavy and weak
Lay my head, count sheep
After a day weary
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Joseph J. Hernandez
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Briana Knight 06 September 2012

i like it. Very soft

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Zoya Khalid 01 September 2012

This reminds me of an episode from Mr.Bean in which unable to sleep he counts sheep in a picture to make himself....hahaha... good work.

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 01 September 2012

Nice short one. Good images expressed. You may consider giving this a title.

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 30 August 2012

Good dreams and good poem. the title is good and attractive. well done.

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Joseph J. Hernandez

Joseph J. Hernandez

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