Thursday, May 17, 2012

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The sun is shining bright
But its raining in my heart.
To give a smile I fight
But inside, it's tearing me apart.
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GAUTHAM LONGMAN
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Amy Marie 17 May 2012

Well done...I especially like the way the beginning and end are written. A situation like the one described in this poem certainly is painful, and when you're in pain, it's fun to have something like the sun to keep you company :)

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