Untitled 02 Poem by Ruby Diaz

Untitled 02

Rating: 5.0


The poets croon could be heard at night
Woe to him, it was his lady's last breath
May a man's love be his reason for death,
For the stars wish to no longer shine on him again.

Sunday, October 29, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: solitude
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sometimes even the poet needs a poem of himself.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Luc Leclaire 31 October 2017

This one reminds me of Khalil Gibran!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 October 2017

Croon of the poet is heard at night due to his lady's last breath. He feels solitude and thus poem flows from heart. Beautiful poem with wonderful imaginary. Thanks for sharing.

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Luc Leclaire 29 October 2017

This is a touching quatrain.

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