oh paradise
hail the unforgettable sights
praise the glory of the breaking sun
honor Venus the morning star…
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Excellent poem Grace with nature featured and also your friends. The last line is superb.... 10 love Karin
oh brilliant friends how many times did you asked me if until when…. if until when my love exists? .until tehre is you.until thre is cuck's voice heard in the morning...until i hear its chorus....let there shall prvail lull....it matters less..lovley write and i share each and every word with feeling....10 read mineyes yes yes....yes to to.... should we feel...
Natures wonder inspires the poet' to end with love what more doth the mind need..lovely words to end this poem +++++10 uavanice1 reagards
Until there was you.........a lovely music and wonderful roses, they tell me of love and beauty! ! ! hhmmm you were inspired to write a poem while listening to this music, am i right? ? ? lovely dear friend..........10sssss
A NICE TRIBUTE TO NATURE AND ITS BEAUTY! THANKS FOR TELLING ME! -Raj Nandy
I really loved this. That ending just echoes in the mind. So majestic. Thank you for this. (smile)
Wish to love and live until there is water in the sea and the sky is with clouds, and music is with survival........ Lyrical write Grace...?
Beautiful work Naizz, there's a wonderful tone to this visual stunner.....really enjoyed this piece.....it kisses the mind..with words that warm the heart...well expressed 10
This is a beautiful, expressive, and very touching write, Lady Grace, one clearly filled with much love, warmth, and emotion. It was a pleasure to read. Carl.
A poem with heartfelt yearning so visible between fine lines Great work, lady,
a wonderful poem on nature and values from a seasoned poet.thanx for sharing. a 10++++ from me. surya
Give these lines to a singer to write a sweet song Grace! good write be nice
Does The Dream Ever Come True? ? No need to close your eyes, no need to close your ears.. wait a lover there, , may he is waiting also there for you.. so lovely and sweet penned.. hazem al..
Last 5 lines highly meaningful........a wonderful poem to read