Sunday, October 4, 2009

Untill There's You Comments

Rating: 4.6

oh paradise
hail the unforgettable sights
praise the glory of the breaking sun
honor Venus the morning star…
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lady grace
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Rafique Farooqi 14 October 2009

Last 5 lines highly meaningful........a wonderful poem to read

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Excellent poem Grace with nature featured and also your friends. The last line is superb.... 10 love Karin

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Akram Awadat 13 October 2009

fantastic lines, well done

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 October 2009

oh brilliant friends how many times did you asked me if until when…. if until when my love exists? .until tehre is you.until thre is cuck's voice heard in the morning...until i hear its chorus....let there shall prvail lull....it matters less..lovley write and i share each and every word with feeling....10 read mineyes yes yes....yes to to.... should we feel...

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Estrella Baldemosa 06 October 2009

lovely poem Grace...

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Ken E Hall 05 October 2009

Natures wonder inspires the poet' to end with love what more doth the mind need..lovely words to end this poem +++++10 uavanice1 reagards

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Catrina Heart 05 October 2009

Until there was you.........a lovely music and wonderful roses, they tell me of love and beauty! ! ! hhmmm you were inspired to write a poem while listening to this music, am i right? ? ? lovely dear friend..........10sssss

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Raj Nandy 04 October 2009

A NICE TRIBUTE TO NATURE AND ITS BEAUTY! THANKS FOR TELLING ME! -Raj Nandy

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Patti Masterman 04 October 2009

I really loved this. That ending just echoes in the mind. So majestic. Thank you for this. (smile)

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Rafique Farooqi 04 October 2009

Wish to love and live until there is water in the sea and the sky is with clouds, and music is with survival........ Lyrical write Grace...?

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Rajaram Ramachandran 04 October 2009

This sounds like music to sing by the lady grace.

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~ Jon London ~ 04 October 2009

Beautiful work Naizz, there's a wonderful tone to this visual stunner.....really enjoyed this piece.....it kisses the mind..with words that warm the heart...well expressed 10

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Carl Harris 04 October 2009

This is a beautiful, expressive, and very touching write, Lady Grace, one clearly filled with much love, warmth, and emotion. It was a pleasure to read. Carl.

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Aziz Alkaabi 04 October 2009

A poem with heartfelt yearning so visible between fine lines Great work, lady,

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Surya . 04 October 2009

a wonderful poem on nature and values from a seasoned poet.thanx for sharing. a 10++++ from me. surya

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Eyan Desir 04 October 2009

Give these lines to a singer to write a sweet song Grace! good write be nice

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Hazem Al Jaber 04 October 2009

Does The Dream Ever Come True? ? No need to close your eyes, no need to close your ears.. wait a lover there, , may he is waiting also there for you.. so lovely and sweet penned.. hazem al..

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Carol Gall 04 October 2009

beautiful lady lovely flow to it 10

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