Untill There's You Poem by lady grace

Untill There's You

Rating: 4.6


oh paradise
hail the unforgettable sights
praise the glory of the breaking sun
honor Venus the morning star…

oh magnificent sky
hold the clouds forming rain
hold the strongest cruel storm
dispense to earth all day long...

oh wonderful rivers
flow like paths from the valleys
stones overlap depths
flow to the soundless sea…

oh brilliant friends
how many times did you asked me
if until when
until when my love exists...

My greatest chums
until there is midnight
Until there is sunlight
until there is music
until there is air
until there is you....

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ken E Hall 05 October 2009

Natures wonder inspires the poet' to end with love what more doth the mind need..lovely words to end this poem +++++10 uavanice1 reagards

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Catrina Heart 05 October 2009

Until there was you.........a lovely music and wonderful roses, they tell me of love and beauty! ! ! hhmmm you were inspired to write a poem while listening to this music, am i right? ? ? lovely dear friend..........10sssss

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Raj Nandy 04 October 2009

A NICE TRIBUTE TO NATURE AND ITS BEAUTY! THANKS FOR TELLING ME! -Raj Nandy

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Patti Masterman 04 October 2009

I really loved this. That ending just echoes in the mind. So majestic. Thank you for this. (smile)

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Rafique Farooqi 04 October 2009

Wish to love and live until there is water in the sea and the sky is with clouds, and music is with survival........ Lyrical write Grace...?

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Rafique Farooqi 14 October 2009

Last 5 lines highly meaningful........a wonderful poem to read

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Excellent poem Grace with nature featured and also your friends. The last line is superb.... 10 love Karin

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Akram Awadat 13 October 2009

fantastic lines, well done

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 October 2009

oh brilliant friends how many times did you asked me if until when…. if until when my love exists? .until tehre is you.until thre is cuck's voice heard in the morning...until i hear its chorus....let there shall prvail lull....it matters less..lovley write and i share each and every word with feeling....10 read mineyes yes yes....yes to to.... should we feel...

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Estrella Baldemosa 06 October 2009

lovely poem Grace...

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