Saturday, January 30, 2016

Until Your Kiss Comments

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I swear to this
I could not see
until your kiss
awakened me
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Barry Middleton
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Barry Middleton 30 January 2016

This is my first attempt at a pantoum. I was not sure if a two beat line was appropriate but I like this little poem whether or not it is technically correct.

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