Until Your Final Breath Comments
If you smiled
From the day you were born,
Go out smiling.
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Oh Practicing Poetess, This Is So Very Potent! ! ! ! ! What A Beautifully Moving Poem! ! ! ! ! Absolutely Love The Words And The Way This Is Done! ! ! ! ! So Very Very Many 10S! ! ! ! ! +++++ Thank You S Much For Sharing
Thank you, Rebecca, for having a mind and heart to appreciate the essence contained in a poem. You get it!
I agree. That is why we write and a lot of other things we all are compelled to do. Well said.
Thank you, Barry the Bard! Have a wonderful, long Memorial Day weekend in the states. Enjoy a nice cookout, and eat lots of burgers! :)
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8/2/2025 5:12:16 AM # 1.0.0
A nice structure to the poem, the first line in the stanza picked up by the third. 'Go out sharing'-good. I will try these things until my last breath.
Thank you Michael, not only for such a positive comment, but also for taking to heart the words of my poem! Poets love to think that their poems might make a difference in the lives of others! Be blessed! : -)