Until We Meet Again Comments

i really like ure style. its like i'm reading a story. i generally don't like long poems... but yours i'm more than willing to tolerate. very good write.

You would be an excellent lyricist! Keep it up.

Such a great poem, I loved it! and it had so many good lines too! I loved 'Is love more powerful than the depth of words? Dare we say what's never been heard? 'I need you' ' so great!

Love is our audience. She hums our song. She invites us to sing along. Perhaps we're shy, But we do know the words Afraid to say what's never been heard... ....just wonderful Love duncanX

Two lines caught my attention among the ease and rhythm of the poem: 'To love is natural. To need is to weaken. ' So true!