Saturday, August 17, 2024

Until We Meet Again. Comments

Rating: 5.0

The world went silent the day you left,
A hush fell over all, as if time itself had wept.
The air grew thick with unshed tears,
And the earth beneath my feet trembled with fears.
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Lewis Dever
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Just brilliant

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A poignant poem. Excellent poetry, the Melancholy feeling fills the air. "memories are shadows, and shadows can't fill" the void you've left. Great write. The rhyme and rhythm of the poem accentuates its poignancy. I am just bowled over. Top score and MyFav

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