Tuesday, July 24, 2012

Until We Fell Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I remember you
I think of us drunk-
sipping from pineapples
and paper umbrellas
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Robin Bennett
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Robert Green 31 July 2012

A wonderful poem :) ................

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Deo Inji 27 July 2012

I like the way you personified the wind whispering & spreading secrets, and also the sunset marrying the horizon, painting vivid imagery in virtually every line...Nice one poet!

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Lynn Stillman 26 July 2012

Robin, you have penned another beautiful poem.Your words have the power to make the reader see every image and feel every emotion. Your talent is amazing. Lynn Stillman

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Hi! U r playing the imagination with words as if playing with pebbles, great. u r going to surpass greater more poets. with love subrat do u remember

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Rick Elpers 25 July 2012

Great imagery. Paints a vivid picture. I like it.

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Robin Bennett

Robin Bennett

New Orleans, La USA
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