Until We Fell Comments

A wonderful poem :) ................

I like the way you personified the wind whispering & spreading secrets, and also the sunset marrying the horizon, painting vivid imagery in virtually every line...Nice one poet!

Robin, you have penned another beautiful poem.Your words have the power to make the reader see every image and feel every emotion. Your talent is amazing. Lynn Stillman

Hi! U r playing the imagination with words as if playing with pebbles, great. u r going to surpass greater more poets. with love subrat do u remember

Great imagery. Paints a vivid picture. I like it.