Until The Seas Run Dry Comments

Until the great dreams are made, He is contiuing to dream, A great sky paradise, A park of green trees, .. thank u for this fine poem full of noble thoughts filled with great imagination.. tony

A few corrections are needed. Probably not your best effort.

cap-a-pie of this poem is really excellent wonderful description like to quote some lines- Until the dark is not light any more but fire and the air is unbreathable, Until you shall be the last girl, i would see in this planet, Until God forsakes his beloved, My, our will is unbreakable.