~ Until The Day I Die~ Comments

a sincere verse with a lot of emotion.

after reading your biography, i can feel the pain just remember that life does not remain the same. everything changes like the tide against the shore, but it will continue to beat, in this world forever more. AMANDA! NEVER GIVE UP ON YOURSELF, FOR THERE IS NO ONE ELSE. I AM READING ALL YOUR POEMS.

AMANDA, I KROSS MA HRT U R VERY GREAT.....BUT I HAV A LIL PROB...TRY TALKIN POET...OKAY...THAT WILL MAKE U A GREAT POET.......BELIV ME .....I TALK POET...ITS MA LYF...SO I TALK IT ALL THE TYM......BUT HONESTLY U R GREAT...KIP IT UP

The rhyming lines are separated at the end which causes a problem in the reading. Otherwise, It is a solid work. The early statements of love set the stage nicely. GW62

My poem talks about what I person meant to me and all the nostalgia I felt, while yours talks about something like a pain, a nostalgia too, but deepier. i'm glad you liked the poems you read. Hugs: *

you had a couple misspelled words. Don't worry I do the same thing. But I just want to say I know the pain this poem speaks of and I think you did a great job