Tuesday, November 25, 2008

Until My Heart Stops Beating Comments

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My Heart is frozen,
and it is all because of her.
She left me here to die,
and yet she didn't explain why.
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Sandra Marie
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Subham Dutta 27 November 2008

Dear Sandra Beltran It is a very good poem. You clearly explained the thoughtness of life.

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Joseph Poewhit 27 November 2008

We all go through experiences in life. Just part of life, it will happen again in the future. One can only learn.

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Ency Bearis 27 November 2008

nice expressed emotion deep in your heart..you let it out.. great write...10 Ency Bearis

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OMG! ! ! ! ! ! I LOVE IT! ! ! THAT IS HOW I FEEL SOMETIMES BUT I COULD NEVER FIND THE EXACT WORDS TO EXPLAIN IT!

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