# # Until It Comes Comments

Fiery, frenzied, seductive, sensual and oh, so passionate! A steamy triumph of a poem! S ;)

What a passionate plea for love. It really is an experience of the senses-10

Sensual, powerful and thoughts provoking! beautiful indeed! :) hugs & kisses, Smiley

The words that go with the sound, and the different images employed makes the poem a passionate one. It is elegant.

How you command the reader's immediate attention with this brilliant poem! Strike me, spill me, burn me, churn me, wrap me', all to a sensitive and sweet finale. What a clever turn you made with this one. 10 love Karin

'Strike me with that one last match Burn me down to the embers'... best lines...burning passion there...10

a novel experience to read such expressions; slit me.....and that too in a love poem...sonya, overall impact is as desired....a lovely, cute poem, dear...

The words in here are so concrete and earthen; 'slit me like a sack full of grain' 'burn me down to the embers'. You can hear and feel and almost touch the lines.