I was just an innocent
Caught in a whirlpool of puerile dreams,
Every second I spent with you,
Really was a dream come true.
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Hello my dear angelic Anjali...well sadly this is how most great love stories end..in a tragedy...I used to be like a dead and inanimate sun, too b4 some one came to my life...then it was all lost... I enjoyed this one as always, very touching and moving...bring back bittersweet memories....thanks for this beautiful poem... A++ for the entertainment with love shan
This is such a beautifully written poem about the late Princess Diana that my mind was flooded with many memories of her and her life as I read your fine words, Anjali. Worse, that terrible crash that ended her life, and many touching secnes from her extraordinary funeral flashed in my mind as well. Your wonderful poem has paid her memory an awesome tribute, and it is poem that you can be proud of for the rest of your life, no matter how long you may live. Carl.
We r already aparted......... kahan India aur Kahan Australia? To death kya karega isme............
...a sad poem...but wonderfully written.... i was touched by your words.... and thinking of Princess Diana...my heart is still aching by her fate.... nice tribute for a woman who was so loved by everybody... who had the heart to love everybody.... 10++++
AmaZIng! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ahhhh....i love this! sad but so butiful! : -D
what a dipressing poem, Yet, there is an innocent fragrance in it. Gambling love on messy table........ wonderful phrases you have used, mixing colours to creat wonderful lustre. well done.10 +++++
From: Rajnish Jena To: Anjali Sinha Date-Time: 12/2/2008 8: 50: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: UNTIL DEATH DO US PART - wow its a superb craetion..and you have dedicated to princess diana.......why? ? well whatever its a fablous creation.i am not so talented but the feelings of the poem is really undescribable........really you are a great poetess.....
there are times wen usage of words are futile...this is one of such times..need i say more...
My innocent heart made rendezvous with your heart But you stealthily pierced it with your love dart Now I can neither eat nor breath nor sleep, And my heart hath pain deep Doctors say pain will remain my intimate part Till death do me and your dart apart good work 10+++
A lovely poem dedicated to the People's Princess, she may be gone but will never be forgotten, well done Anjali, Lynda xx
love your view on love it kind of reminds of someone and thats what i like about this one because it brings me back to my relationship but only i wasn't in love as i thought i was good job
The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched. They must be felt with the heart Ur poems are so touching
Very beautiful poem full of imagery. You have done an excellent job on this piece.
To share what is difficult; to heal what is hurting; to think what is not possible; to understand without even talking is the miracle called Love
I dedicate these humble words to Princess Anjalie A- Angelic N- Noble J Jovial A- Adorable L- Lovely I- Inimitable E- Elegant... Sure, I know: you are beyond all these and your sky has no limits... A wide expanse of words...love and life...
An excellently penned write, honest and heartfelt.