Until another day he said
As home is behind,
And as the world lies ahead,
When the fields go plain of red, now covered in blood shed,
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I like this poem, it was thoughtful written keep it up.please read my poems
Actually, you are wrong. It is a very very thought provoking poem. Makes the reader ponder the life of a soldier and everything they endure. I think you penned a very good write. Keep writing!