When the springtime comes
then all the trees are green and supple
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ravi...a beautiful love poem...simple and sweet...love...nalini
You style and the words are so simple... the reading is extremely smooth... this is simply good. The words are framed in such purity that your heart reflects through this poem. Good write.....10 for you.
Ravi, it's superb how you've compared your love for her to the seasons. Great going! Preets
This is a wonderful, flowing piece. Most excellent!