Monday, September 18, 2006

Until All Our Life Is Sailed Through...... Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the springtime comes
then all the trees are green and supple
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Ravi Sathasivam
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Kelly Allen Vinal 18 September 2006

This is a wonderful, flowing piece. Most excellent!

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Nalini Hebbar 18 September 2006

ravi...a beautiful love poem...simple and sweet...love...nalini

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Catastrophe King 18 September 2006

You style and the words are so simple... the reading is extremely smooth... this is simply good. The words are framed in such purity that your heart reflects through this poem. Good write.....10 for you.

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William Jackson 18 September 2006

Fantastic poem. I love it. Good job.

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Preeti - is here! 18 September 2006

Ravi, it's superb how you've compared your love for her to the seasons. Great going! Preets

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