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Yes, that certainly is love and passion, Susheela! : -)

Until I see you face to face Until I feel you in the flesh.. this pain shall not go......... intense passion. here is poetic openeness. get away from all your inhibitions and try to be free when u write. you have that potential.. do it. then you will bring forth beautiful gems of poems. tony

Beautiful poem, very well written...gpd bless! !

Until eternity you will wait it seems for your love that you long to hold. Nice expression of your sentiment.