Until... Poem by Lodigiana Poetess

Until...

Rating: 5.0


When I am gone
no space to fill,
no sound to make
no time to kill,
no tears that stain a cheek so soft,
nor fly with larks high up aloft.
An empty room
is empty still..
When I am gone

When I am gone
The stars and sun
continue in their princely realm.
As winter chills dissolve to spring
and flowering buds are opening,
each seasons charm will leave its mark
as nests are built, and still, the lark
soars high above and sings of love..
When I am gone...

When I am gone
the song we sang
will silent stay,
tho' toll bells rang
a mournful beat of pulsing heart -
now still,
remains forever yours
and will.....
until, until,
and still,
until......

Until...
Sunday, December 2, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: forever,leaving,loss,love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Love last forever....Until the end of the end
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 15 December 2018

Such a lovely poem. Stay healthy and fit always and keep your ink flowing. Enjoyed the poem thoroughly.10++++

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Lodigiana 15 December 2018

Thank you so much Anil, so pleased you enjoyed the poem and good health and happiness to you always xx

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Chris Embrick 13 December 2018

A beautifully crafted, flowing poem. True love is indeed eternal.. Have a blessed new year. I hope it is filled with love and friends and many days of joy.

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Lodigiana Poetess 14 December 2018

Hi Chris, thank you so much for your kind comments and wishes for the coming year. After a few difficult weeks those wishes are very dear to me and I would like to wish you also, blessings, peace and love for the coming year and fulfilment in all you seek. Your friend Lodigiana xx

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 December 2018

Dear Lodigiana, such a lovely poem..............10++++++++++++++++++

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Lodigiana Poetess 05 December 2018

Thank you so very much Bernard for your generous comment which is truly valued.

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