Untied Boat Comments
Over an afternoon tea,
The wind sliding like touching
Across the green screens of bamboos
To the quiet lake
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lovely.... it has the staid age old charm of a Chinese garden... with an ethereal hushed calm, almost mystical and spiritual in content v nice liked
lovely.... it has the staid age old charm of a Chinese garden... with an ethereal hushed calm, almost mystical and spiritual in content v nice liked
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7/27/2025 7:59:00 PM # 1.0.0
Wow! Your imagery is superb, Wang! Your rhythm flows evenly through each word, I really like this line: 'The water hiding smiles from the center'. It gives your poem an air of mystery lying beneath it's blanket of words. Really great poem, I enjoyed it immensely! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn