Monday, November 7, 2011

Untested Wings Comments

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And what of the dreams you left behind,
to be where you are; was it worth the cost

Did you trade your soul for someone else's,
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Patti Masterman
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Smoky Hoss 07 November 2011

Very good... and very true.

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Kevin Patrick 07 November 2011

I love the texture that embodies this poem, its brief but amazing depth, that circulates in my head after I read it. Superbe job, great write.

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Darkangel Flyfree 07 November 2011

Nice poem. If only we could be happy with who we are and not trying to be like someone else. We're all different thats what makes life interesting.

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