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The stark whiteness is all I see,
Perhaps it’s just reflection,
Of conflicting emotions in me,
Every facet with a brilliant glow,
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Lovely poem and nicely concluded: 'Like pious part of my soul Trapped in confines of a sinners heart.....'
Words put together so well with emotion. Excellent with support and beautiful comments from your fans
Suberb picture you have drawn with the rose as a symbol of everything pure in the whiteness that is life, as we leave our own trail of sins, goodness, hope and love as we struggle and fight for who we are! You have written a perfect gem!
Beautiful write! A rose found amidst that snowy frozen terrain!
Interesting the colour and depth of the promise of the bud and its potential of seeds a primordia of seeds, an ovum a promise, in all things a promise of to defy the austere. Nicely written.
Wow amazing poem! Yor metaphor is brill and how u end it is esp impressiv. Do read my latest poem too. Warm wishs.
Your an amazing writer far better than I can ever be continue writing
Great write. I like the use of imagery. Keep writing. Do read my poems and comment
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7/23/2025 3:00:50 AM # 1.0.0
Emotions well painted , thanks for sharing