Untamed Spirit Comments

Yes Nosheen, dont cage your dreams. Give them wings. and Let them fly!

Rain dance! With the muse of freedom. Nice work.

Dreams are not to be locked Desires are not to caged Wonderfully expressed emotions with sincerity of heart and soul.Keep it up Nosheen Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

A beautiful poem my friend, Nosheen.

Your awareness is worth all of the gold that this world conceals. You understand the depth of pain and loss, of sorrow and disappointment, of set-backs and disillusionment but you come armed with that most important gift. A determination to dance in the rain, to stand tall and not only not surrender but to charge head-long into life's rain and be replenished by it. Rain has the face of freedom, every leaf, every tree. This poem joins a handful of others in my favorites. Let us mingle with the spirit of rain. No search for mountain top splendor. Why when each raindrop has its own fairy tale........yes.

Dreams are not to be locked / Desires are not to be caged - Amen to that! I like the tone of your poem: it is upbeat, inviting, already doing the dancing that it encourages its readers to do, B-U-T I also sense a deep current of real need in you to boost your spirits. This is not just fun for fun's sale, but a sincere attempt to lift yourself and others who might be down to take charge of the situation, to take action and make things better. Like the Beatles song HEY JUDE - TAKE A SAD SONG AND MAKE IT BETTER!

In the untamed spirit of rain, let us wash away all our pain. In the sultry heat of summer, the very thought of a down pour cools the spirit. Lovely poem Nosheen!

Rain is one of the most primal forces. Your poem does it justice.

Let's imbibe the untamed spirit of rain Dreams are not to be locked Desires are not to be caged. this is a beautiful poem with a wonderful graphic.. full of passion and eros......... thank you. i feel elated when i read you thankyou dev