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future holds invisible
of this and that and all unknown
to us stuck here in present time
where life will coast on rollers no
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Daniel Nairn
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Sophia White 25 September 2006

Poetically speaking, as a colleague, this poem has a driving pace that makes you read it without drawing breath until it's done - a nice aspect. Otherwise speaking, as a friend, I like your determined approach. Just know that you never have to ride those coasters, walk those roads, or swim those rivers alone.

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Landrey 24 September 2006

sounds like a long and winding road! ! Long Live the Beatles! ! Great write, nairn. -landrey

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