The joy that your heart brings
to me is a simple, precious thing
and has inspired me to sing
to you this song.
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Beneath the tough exterior of a pirate, there beats a tender heart. The marshmallow is encased in steel. Lovely poem to pluck a woman's heartstrings! :)
Thanks for the comment Practicing Poetess. Jagged rock and icy steel camouflage the things I feel.
Breath Takingly Beautiful! ! ! ! ! Wow! ! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ++++++
I hear the laughs you lightly share I see the smile you always wear and the pain you sometimes bare that you can't hide. Beautiful lines..Thanks for sharing beautiful poem..plz do spare sm time to gv your valuable comments and suggestion on my collection.
Exuberant and captivating in its totality... Why Captain you keep phases between the visits.. Be writing at least once in a week. My letter to awaits your reading..
So so nice to read your words again Captain, this is a sun-filled balm of simplicity and love. Beautiful
(Welcome hither, as is the spring to the earth.... Shakespeare) ....... with a surprise song, sung so silently & so nicely...surprise...because just typed the name and saw the word NEW written in red color...if you wish to know which part of the poem is beautiful, then read this whole poem of yours...
If this b true then u sure r a lenient lover. 'ill even let u go and i wil not confiscate yor heart', r words mine darnd possesive man cud neva mean to say to me. Kudos poet.
This song, beautiful song appeals to loves emotions. the readers entranced to the poem until the end.
You have returned CC? Or is this just a transitory visit. In any event, you have graced us with a lovely poem, so romantic.
That is awesome for me to comment the great poem...you write it with something..i think the ink you used was too concentrated with the feelings and emotion, i truly enjoyed this gorgeous write..never tired to read even if it was a mile long poem, because the sound just right...like when you sing this song, your unsung love song! great to hear you back! _Soul
Outstanding write....thank u...