Sunday, October 30, 2022

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Walking way of time longest,
Inexorable; No goal has the
story of life; all are increasing
in the step, by step of breath
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Richard Wlodarski 31 October 2022

A magnificent poem of great depth and beauty!

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Brilliant poem. " ….Autumnal dew hugs the rib-cell/ of the poetic thought; longest sighs /are caring the time's myth".. marvellous.great imagery..loved

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Anil Kumar Panda 31 October 2022

Beautifully crafted and a meaningful write. Nice share. Thanks.

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Pallab Chaudhury 30 October 2022

Superb! ''No present is permanent; unstable mind on the greasy longest way of time...' well spoken...with best wishes/PC

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 October 2022

No present is permanent.... true. Well done

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