Unstoppable Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Unstoppable

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Walking way of time longest,
Inexorable; No goal has the
story of life; all are increasing
in the step, by step of breath

Nib of the poetic pen wants to fly
on the morning sky, by the fallen
feathers wants to draw the diving
sun; Autumnal dew hugs the rib-cell
of the poetic thought; longest sighs
are caring the time's myth

No leave survives in the leisure time
Activeness of busy life is making
the pavement of past and future;
No present is permanent; unstable
mind on the greasy longest way of
Time; unstoppable all surviving kith


©Mahtab Bangalee
Chattogram
30/10/2022

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 31 October 2022

A magnificent poem of great depth and beauty!

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Brilliant poem. " ….Autumnal dew hugs the rib-cell/ of the poetic thought; longest sighs /are caring the time's myth".. marvellous.great imagery..loved

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Anil Kumar Panda 31 October 2022

Beautifully crafted and a meaningful write. Nice share. Thanks.

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Pallab Chaudhury 30 October 2022

Superb! ''No present is permanent; unstable mind on the greasy longest way of time...' well spoken...with best wishes/PC

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 October 2022

No present is permanent.... true. Well done

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