Friday, October 13, 2017

Unstable Emotions Comments

Rating: 4.7

Spilling on my pages like a soda bottle that has been knocked over.
Rambled and twisted like a search word puzzle with unsolvable answers
I'm no scientist but i bet rocket science would be easier to explain and far less difficult to understand.
My mush like brain unable to locate the right way to express them.
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Nika Mcguin 13 October 2017

The imagery here is amazing. In essence you painted a very thick web of confusion for us. This piece details just how confusing emotions can be, they are so nonsensical that the brain struggles to process them. And that part about robots even wanting to self-destruct at times, pure genius! ~

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 October 2017

Horrifically amazing curse provokes thought and we feel so sad. Emotion comes in mind. Bright flowers are instantly killed by the toxic rain. This is brilliantly penned thought provoking poem shared here.10

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Simply Ruby 13 October 2017

Thank you so very much.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 13 October 2017

This poem is written filled with emotion..... a highest 10++++

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Simply Ruby 13 October 2017

Thank you. It is something that came while trying to put in paper my emotions yet being unable to, i decide it to write about how hard it is to express them at this moment instead.

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