Unspoken Words And Empty Gaze Comments

I like the rhyme scheme, and the repetition of the two verses between stanzas. Lovely imagery!

'somber, silent buzzing street'..isn't it a paradox? Being lonely in a crowd is a unique experience. The protagonist of your story in rhyme is in the state of oblivion. Oh, your poetry is difficult to interpret.

Hi Sat... I'm wondering who this is that moves through the crowds and down the street oblivious... inspite of the life surrounding him? Nice write... Shirley :))

Dark dreary dazzling roads, Blasé to the bustling crowds, Unaware of the sun or cloud, on and on to his own abode. It sounds like a deep solitary experience on the streets of Madina. A spiritual journey.

beautiful poem written in provokative and great imagery...fabulous diction and end rhymes........10