Monday, May 14, 2007

Unspoken Words Comments

Rating: 4.5

Blades are berried into my skin
Now the only question is who will win
This fight
To save my life
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Slim Jim
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good job very well wrote

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This is my favorite! =) ♥

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Derrick Clark 14 May 2007

very good poem, nice writing.

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Derrick Clark 14 May 2007

very good poem, nice writing.

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Chase Casterline 14 May 2007

I love it, So true. It could flow better though.

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