Unspoken Heart Of Broken Comments

wow... this is an amazing poem honey. great job. i love it! ! ! like Stacey said a powerful emotional piece. A heart that all but lives to lurch, a spit of bloodless splatter. good lines. PYT

Wow what a powerful emotional piece. Brilliantly written.

why so broken....kick back, I say....nice piece of yoursef here Saint

Lies and all or nothing else, hatred deep for you myself. Cast me out for whats not felt, I like those lines bud good job. I like hearing you read it better, it sounds cooler. good job. PYT