Tuesday, May 9, 2017

Unspoken Comments

Rating: 5.0

there is a place where I must go
that's like a book that has no name

you will not find it on the shelf
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Barry Middleton
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Nosheen Irfan 10 May 2017

A very evocative piece of writing. Memories are our best companion in solitude. And we all have some wish left unfulfilled. Writing about it helps a lot. A10

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Barry Middleton 10 May 2017

I think there is a common desire to return to our roots if the memories were happy ones. Thanks again for reading and commenting Nosheen.

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Rajnish Manga 09 May 2017

Highly readable and nostalgic in its tone. The poem takes you to various scenes and stages of life. @@@ and fruiting trees abound in bloom to lend the air their sweet perfume @@@ an old piano freshens night and calls us home at dinner time

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Barry Middleton 09 May 2017

Thanks. That's just the way it was in my childhood days.

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