Wednesday, August 18, 2010

Unspoken Comments

Rating: 4.0

When 'it's' around she doesn't see me.
When 'it's' around she doesn't see anyone...

She gives 'it' her all, and all is what 'it' takes.
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Miranda Lucas
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Miranda Denooyer 18 August 2010

I really like this, it is interesting, it keeps people wondering til the very end and on, such as my self, the 'it' tht everyone loves is the secret, amazing poem :)

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