Saturday, July 25, 2009

Unspoken Comments

Rating: 3.8

unspoken, betoken, locked
in time, life passes…
yet, dreams can break
through walls
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djinnga fairbairn
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Karendymq Mq 08 August 2009

love it! really it seems like the time stops for you at the time you want to write! really nice! 456321456131321 stars! jajajaja

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Mark Nwagwu 27 July 2009

this is good, djinnga, don't mind the first vote of 5. No: this is not a '5' poem. I scored it higher. 'When Being meets world Divine, dreams can break through walls inside' and life ascends to heights unthought of, unspoken.

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