unspoken, betoken, locked
in time, life passes…
yet, dreams can break
through walls
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this is good, djinnga, don't mind the first vote of 5. No: this is not a '5' poem. I scored it higher. 'When Being meets world Divine, dreams can break through walls inside' and life ascends to heights unthought of, unspoken.
love it! really it seems like the time stops for you at the time you want to write! really nice! 456321456131321 stars! jajajaja